Hi Hanifi, Your story seems good but you have some spelling mistakes such as "tey" instead of "they","MYSTERÄ°OUS" instead of "MYSTERIOUS", "unfortunatly" instead of "unfortunately" "raison" instead of "reason".
Also, you have some grammatical mistakes; "the footprints which was going ...." you should use "were" instead of "was". Also, you have written " he will died", I could not understand what you tried to say. I think it must be like " he was going to die".
The present KERPOOF story telling project was designed to explore how 16 EFL university students studying at the Preparatory School, Sakarya University/Turkey weave fictional stories into the media enriched environment, and how the use of a particular software sparks the creative writing among them.
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Hi Hanifi,
Your story seems good but you have some spelling mistakes such as "tey" instead of "they","MYSTERÄ°OUS" instead of "MYSTERIOUS", "unfortunatly" instead of "unfortunately" "raison" instead of "reason".
Also, you have some grammatical mistakes; "the footprints which was going ...." you should use "were" instead of "was".
Also, you have written " he will died", I could not understand what you tried to say. I think it must be like " he was going to die".
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