Muhammet, I am sure that you are actually good at grammmar but you have some mistakes you must not do. For example; "Three childs", plaese never ever do such kind of mistakes.I am sure that you know "three children".Also, you have written "They" in capital letters even if "they is not the first word of the sentence.
On the other hand, there is not a harmony in the follow of the events in your story. Because of this,I have a problem in concentration while I am reading your story, and I need to read the pages again.
The present KERPOOF story telling project was designed to explore how 16 EFL university students studying at the Preparatory School, Sakarya University/Turkey weave fictional stories into the media enriched environment, and how the use of a particular software sparks the creative writing among them.
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Muhammet, I am sure that you are actually good at grammmar but you have some mistakes you must not do. For example; "Three childs", plaese never ever do such kind of mistakes.I am sure that you know "three children".Also, you have written "They" in capital letters even if "they is not the first word of the sentence.
On the other hand, there is not a harmony in the follow of the events in your story. Because of this,I have a problem in concentration while I am reading your story, and I need to read the pages again.
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