The words fail me Ali! I don't know whether it is good for you. However,you are such a cool person that you know how you can make fun of life.:) Since there aren't lots of sentences, ı could simply find a few mistakes like "... discovered (the) the law of gravity." "one of the most important thing(s)". İn addition, you should write "without using any energy" instead of "with using no energy".:)
The present KERPOOF story telling project was designed to explore how 16 EFL university students studying at the Preparatory School, Sakarya University/Turkey weave fictional stories into the media enriched environment, and how the use of a particular software sparks the creative writing among them.
1 comment:
The words fail me Ali!
I don't know whether it is good for you. However,you are such a cool person that you know how you can make fun of life.:)
Since there aren't lots of sentences, ı could simply find a few mistakes like "... discovered (the) the law of gravity." "one of the most important thing(s)".
İn addition, you should write "without using any energy" instead of "with using no energy".:)
Post a Comment