Tuesday, February 28, 2012

"Apple" by Ali Guven

http://www.kerpoof.com/#/view?s=2gs11bvocMo3dgh1-c-270a61-x

1 comment:

Nurbanu said...

The words fail me Ali!
I don't know whether it is good for you. However,you are such a cool person that you know how you can make fun of life.:)
Since there aren't lots of sentences, ı could simply find a few mistakes like "... discovered (the) the law of gravity." "one of the most important thing(s)".
İn addition, you should write "without using any energy" instead of "with using no energy".:)