Hi Hanifi, Your story seems good but you have some spelling mistakes such as "tey" instead of "they","MYSTERİOUS" instead of "MYSTERIOUS", "unfortunatly" instead of "unfortunately" "raison" instead of "reason".
Also, you have some grammatical mistakes; "the footprints which was going ...." you should use "were" instead of "was". Also, you have written " he will died", I could not understand what you tried to say. I think it must be like " he was going to die".
The present KERPOOF story telling project was designed to explore how 16 EFL university students studying at the Preparatory School, Sakarya University/Turkey weave fictional stories into the media enriched environment, and how the use of a particular software sparks the creative writing among them.
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Hi Hanifi,
Your story seems good but you have some spelling mistakes such as "tey" instead of "they","MYSTERİOUS" instead of "MYSTERIOUS", "unfortunatly" instead of "unfortunately" "raison" instead of "reason".
Also, you have some grammatical mistakes; "the footprints which was going ...." you should use "were" instead of "was".
Also, you have written " he will died", I could not understand what you tried to say. I think it must be like " he was going to die".
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