Wednesday, February 29, 2012

"Mysterious Treasure" by Hanifi Caliskan

http://www.kerpoof.com/#/view?s=2gs11buUp0o5czk4kw00-d-831170-x

1 comment:

Melih Caylak said...

Hi Hanifi,
Your story seems good but you have some spelling mistakes such as "tey" instead of "they","MYSTERİOUS" instead of "MYSTERIOUS", "unfortunatly" instead of "unfortunately" "raison" instead of "reason".

Also, you have some grammatical mistakes; "the footprints which was going ...." you should use "were" instead of "was".
Also, you have written " he will died", I could not understand what you tried to say. I think it must be like " he was going to die".