Tuesday, February 28, 2012

"Time Travilling" by Hanifi Caliskan

http://www.kerpoof.com/#/view?s=2gs11buUp0o5cPc4wk80-e-006496-x

3 comments:

nurbanu said...
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Nurbanu said...

It is not a big deal.
Yet,ı am sorry as ı wrote "To be with" rather than writing "To begin with".:)

nurbanu said...

Hi Hanifi,
To begin with, I liked your story.
However, I did not understand why you wrote some parts of your story with blue letters.
And I assume you should be more careful while you are using punctuation marks like "?...":)