Monday, February 27, 2012

"Dangerous Game" by Muhammet Merdivan

1 comment:

furkan gumus said...

Hi Muhammmet,
I find your story pretty good but there are just a few mistakes. For example, "they must be some pirate", in this sentence you should write "some pirates".
I would like to learn how you have inspired before you start writing..
Hope to see your comment...