Monday, February 20, 2012

" Water On The Moon" by Tufan Gok

http://www.kerpoof.com/#/view?s=2gs11bvItgo5czg4fM00-d-39af93-x

2 comments:

hanifi calıskan said...
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Hanifi Caliskan said...

Hi, Tufan. I like your story, especially the pictures are great.Because the pictures you use in your story reflects the general idea of the story. However I am sure that you can do better.The written texts and the speech bubbles can be designed better. For example, in one of the pages, the professor and his assistant is talking but the arrows of the speech bubbles are not directed. you can show the person who talk with the help of arrows.