Hi, Tufan. I like your story, especially the pictures are great.Because the pictures you use in your story reflects the general idea of the story. However I am sure that you can do better.The written texts and the speech bubbles can be designed better. For example, in one of the pages, the professor and his assistant is talking but the arrows of the speech bubbles are not directed. you can show the person who talk with the help of arrows.
The present KERPOOF story telling project was designed to explore how 16 EFL university students studying at the Preparatory School, Sakarya University/Turkey weave fictional stories into the media enriched environment, and how the use of a particular software sparks the creative writing among them.
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Hi, Tufan. I like your story, especially the pictures are great.Because the pictures you use in your story reflects the general idea of the story. However I am sure that you can do better.The written texts and the speech bubbles can be designed better. For example, in one of the pages, the professor and his assistant is talking but the arrows of the speech bubbles are not directed. you can show the person who talk with the help of arrows.
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