Sunday, February 12, 2012

"Riposte" by Tunchan Sukur

http://www.kerpoof.com/#/view?s=2gs11bv1ewo5dz441M00-d-c93907-x

2 comments:

melih caylak said...

Tunçhan, you are still using capital letters. As far as I'm concerned, the way you use in yor stories is not true. According to rules of story writing, you must use captital letters only while you are starting a sentence and in use for special names. But if we think your grammer which you use in your stories are well. Congradulations!

Tufan Gök said...

Tunçhan i think you should be more careful about punctuation.For example in the first and second pages you used "but" at the begining of the sentence after the dot.What i mean is you shouldn't use "but" after dot or don't use dot.