Monday, February 6, 2012

"New World" by Furkan Gumus

http://www.kerpoof.com/#/view?s=2gs11buQa0o5cz44vg00-d-fbab1f-x

2 comments:

omer karakaya said...

In your story, there are great deals of mistakes. Some sentences are grammmatically incorrect. For example, "..... the appearing her organs wherever she wants user". What did you mean when you were writing this sentence?

Furkan said...

if you read all sentence you can understand what i mean. And i know i made lots of grammatical mistake, i did not care the grammar when i wrote the story :) thank you !