In your story, there are great deals of mistakes. Some sentences are grammmatically incorrect. For example, "..... the appearing her organs wherever she wants user". What did you mean when you were writing this sentence?
if you read all sentence you can understand what i mean. And i know i made lots of grammatical mistake, i did not care the grammar when i wrote the story :) thank you !
The present KERPOOF story telling project was designed to explore how 16 EFL university students studying at the Preparatory School, Sakarya University/Turkey weave fictional stories into the media enriched environment, and how the use of a particular software sparks the creative writing among them.
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In your story, there are great deals of mistakes. Some sentences are grammmatically incorrect. For example, "..... the appearing her organs wherever she wants user". What did you mean when you were writing this sentence?
if you read all sentence you can understand what i mean. And i know i made lots of grammatical mistake, i did not care the grammar when i wrote the story :) thank you !
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