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Purpose of KERPOOF Research Project
The present KERPOOF story telling project was designed to explore how 16 EFL university students studying at the Preparatory School, Sakarya University/Turkey weave fictional
stories into the media enriched environment, and how the use of a particular software sparks the creative writing among them.
stories into the media enriched environment, and how the use of a particular software sparks the creative writing among them.
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2 comments:
Nurbanu, you can write the evil instead of the evils in the first page of your story. Because "the evil" has a plural meaning so you don't have to write "the evils". Also, It could be better if you write "the problems of humanbeings" instead of "the problems of the tired humanity".
You must be careful in the use of tenses(Please,see the 1st sentence in p.4).
Tunçhan, first of all, thanks for your comments. However, ı think writing " evils" is not wrong. I will correct the 1st sentence in p.5.
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