...: "Finding Yourself In Everypart of Life" by Nurbanu Bulgur

Monday, February 6, 2012

melih caylak said...: Nurbanu, in your first sentence of the story, you have written " exalted GOD". I could not understand whqat you mean? Generally, your sentences are too long that I struggle in catching the meaning of the sentences.; February 10, 2012 at 6:20 AM
nurbanu said...: "my exalted God" means "Yüce Allahım". You may have a point in your second sentence.Because, this story have an intense expresion. This is my style. It is not problem for me.Thank you!; February 10, 2012 at 11:57 AM
tunçhan said...: Nurbanu,you should have written 'some birds were moaning as if they had not had a companion' or in past simple(5th page).For instance,'you look as if you have seen a ghost'.Parts of such sentences must define the same period of time.What's more,you have been writing enjoyable stories since we started to write :D; February 11, 2012 at 7:00 AM
nurbanu said...: Thanks a million Tunçhan!
I will pay attention to your warnings:); February 13, 2012 at 8:21 AM