Hi Hanifi, To begin with, I liked your story. However, I did not understand why you wrote some parts of your story with blue letters. And I assume you should be more careful while you are using punctuation marks like "?...":)
The present KERPOOF story telling project was designed to explore how 16 EFL university students studying at the Preparatory School, Sakarya University/Turkey weave fictional stories into the media enriched environment, and how the use of a particular software sparks the creative writing among them.
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It is not a big deal.
Yet,ı am sorry as ı wrote "To be with" rather than writing "To begin with".:)
Hi Hanifi,
To begin with, I liked your story.
However, I did not understand why you wrote some parts of your story with blue letters.
And I assume you should be more careful while you are using punctuation marks like "?...":)
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