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Purpose of KERPOOF Research Project
The present KERPOOF story telling project was designed to explore how 16 EFL university students studying at the Preparatory School, Sakarya University/Turkey weave fictional
stories into the media enriched environment, and how the use of a particular software sparks the creative writing among them.
stories into the media enriched environment, and how the use of a particular software sparks the creative writing among them.
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2 comments:
Furkan,you can use better verbs to define the feelings of the characters in your story. For example, you can write ""feel relax" instead of stay relax".
hi furkan, firstly I am very happy to read your second story.. :) I liked your character because it is also my favourite animation character of my childhood. So I enjoyed while reading. But you have some grammatical mistakes. You have written " he who have never feel". Grammatically, you must write "he who has never felt". Also, you should be careful in the use of simple present tense.If you correct your such kind of mistakes, your next story will be wonderful.
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