Thursday, January 19, 2012

" War For Love" by Hanifi Calıskan

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1 comment:

nurbanu said...

I think that you should write "like the wars or such as wars" instead of writing "as wars".I am writing the other mistkes one by one."The most important thing is that his wife passed away." "He teaches his son how to lead a kingdom." "He wanted to be like other young boys.He pleased by hunting... and sometimes..." You forgot to use blank among some words.You should pay attention whether you write the letters correctly.