Sunday, January 15, 2012

"Breaking The Habbits / A Real Story" by Melih Caylak

1 comment:

nurbanu said...

First of all,ı want to correct some spelling mistakes. On the first page:"He had wanted to break his habits." On the second page:"They affect human health badly and We use this drugs in order to escape somethings which make us nervous." On the third page:"This story tells you his life after he breaks his bad habits. On the last page:"We think he will not use anything which makes him numb." I hope that you will be more carefull.In addition,ı guess that you will show attention to harmony among the pages,in particular,the backgrounds on your other stories.