Hi Tunçhan, In one of your sentences, you have written "They might be encounter with such a mighty enemy." However, the word "encounter" is not used with be. It is an active sentence. If you want to make it passive, you can use " might be encountered". Also you should be careful in the use of " don't, doesn't".You have some spelling mistakes such as " enought" :) The thing ı like in your story a lot is the harmony between the text and the characters. Thank you for your stories.:)
The present KERPOOF story telling project was designed to explore how 16 EFL university students studying at the Preparatory School, Sakarya University/Turkey weave fictional stories into the media enriched environment, and how the use of a particular software sparks the creative writing among them.
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Hi Tunçhan,
In one of your sentences, you have written "They might be encounter with such a mighty enemy."
However, the word "encounter" is not used with be. It is an active sentence. If you want to make it passive, you can use " might be encountered". Also you should be careful in the use of " don't, doesn't".You have some spelling mistakes such as " enought" :)
The thing ı like in your story a lot is the harmony between the text and the characters.
Thank you for your stories.:)
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