The question is unable to understand easily. Because firstly your charecter was amazed the around and then suddenly its feelings are changing. You should be more slow when you are changing your charecters' feeling like this story.
Altough my character was amazed in this part,ı thought that I could reflect well how My lion felt when it encountered what it did not estimate.I guess,If I had not used the remarkable sentences,I could not have aroused this effect.Thanks for your comment, though.
Sorry! That I chose to write "only few months ago" may not be an important problem. Because,"few" and "a few" are almost same things.However,I wrote "mounths" instead of writing "months".Thanks for your warning.I had not realized that small mistake.
The present KERPOOF story telling project was designed to explore how 16 EFL university students studying at the Preparatory School, Sakarya University/Turkey weave fictional stories into the media enriched environment, and how the use of a particular software sparks the creative writing among them.
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Oh my Gosh! What is the fuss? There were....
The question is unable to understand easily. Because firstly your charecter was amazed the around and then suddenly its feelings are changing. You should be more slow when you are changing your charecters' feeling like this story.
Altough my character was amazed in this part,ı thought that I could reflect well how My lion felt when it encountered what it did not estimate.I guess,If I had not used the remarkable sentences,I could not have aroused this effect.Thanks for your comment, though.
I guess it should be ''only a few months ago''
Sorry!
That I chose to write "only few months ago" may not be an important problem. Because,"few" and "a few" are almost same things.However,I wrote "mounths" instead of writing "months".Thanks for your warning.I had not realized that small mistake.
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