Saturday, January 14, 2012

"Adventures of Luffy" by Furkan Gumus

3 comments:

nurbanu said...

I liked your story.As far as I am concerned,you successfully tied the pages of your story to each other.I expect that your other stories will be as successful as your first story was.

Hanifi Caliskan said...

Furkan, you have made a good starting with your story in the beginning of KERPOOF storywriting research. However, you have some spelling and punctuation mistakes. For example; lonliness, espacilly He.The speech bubbles and background of your story are perfect. I am curious about reading your new stories... :)

Ali Guven said...

Hi Furkan,
I liked your story but you have some grammatical mistakes such as "his decide" instead of "his decision", and you have forgottwn to write prepositions such as " stay the village" instead of "stay in the village". Hope not to do such kind of mistakes in your next stories.