I liked your story.As far as I am concerned,you successfully tied the pages of your story to each other.I expect that your other stories will be as successful as your first story was.
Furkan, you have made a good starting with your story in the beginning of KERPOOF storywriting research. However, you have some spelling and punctuation mistakes. For example; lonliness, espacilly He.The speech bubbles and background of your story are perfect. I am curious about reading your new stories... :)
Hi Furkan, I liked your story but you have some grammatical mistakes such as "his decide" instead of "his decision", and you have forgottwn to write prepositions such as " stay the village" instead of "stay in the village". Hope not to do such kind of mistakes in your next stories.
The present KERPOOF story telling project was designed to explore how 16 EFL university students studying at the Preparatory School, Sakarya University/Turkey weave fictional stories into the media enriched environment, and how the use of a particular software sparks the creative writing among them.
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I liked your story.As far as I am concerned,you successfully tied the pages of your story to each other.I expect that your other stories will be as successful as your first story was.
Furkan, you have made a good starting with your story in the beginning of KERPOOF storywriting research. However, you have some spelling and punctuation mistakes. For example; lonliness, espacilly He.The speech bubbles and background of your story are perfect. I am curious about reading your new stories... :)
Hi Furkan,
I liked your story but you have some grammatical mistakes such as "his decide" instead of "his decision", and you have forgottwn to write prepositions such as " stay the village" instead of "stay in the village". Hope not to do such kind of mistakes in your next stories.
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