Sunday, January 22, 2012

" Magical Drum Stick" by Ali Guven

http://www.kerpoof.com/#/view?s=2gs11bvocMo3cgi15000-d-dc780e-x

5 comments:

nurbanu said...

I think that it is a little and pretty story.However,you did not use anyp unctuation mark.And This prevented your story from being fluent.Despite small mistakes,ı like your story.

Tufan Gök said...

Nurbanu you shouldn't use "ı" because there is no "ı" in english abc.Thank you.

Tufan Gök said...

if you want to write complex sentences by using "when" "while" you must be more careful.
You should look at the first page of "Magical Drum Stick".

nurbanu said...

Tufan, I don't understand you.All right! What are you writing instead of writing "I"? Although I don't understand what you said,thanks for eveything:)

Tufan Gök said...

you can use "I" but you can't use "ı".
Can you see the difference?