I think that it is a little and pretty story.However,you did not use anyp unctuation mark.And This prevented your story from being fluent.Despite small mistakes,ı like your story.
The present KERPOOF story telling project was designed to explore how 16 EFL university students studying at the Preparatory School, Sakarya University/Turkey weave fictional stories into the media enriched environment, and how the use of a particular software sparks the creative writing among them.
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I think that it is a little and pretty story.However,you did not use anyp unctuation mark.And This prevented your story from being fluent.Despite small mistakes,ı like your story.
Nurbanu you shouldn't use "ı" because there is no "ı" in english abc.Thank you.
if you want to write complex sentences by using "when" "while" you must be more careful.
You should look at the first page of "Magical Drum Stick".
Tufan, I don't understand you.All right! What are you writing instead of writing "I"? Although I don't understand what you said,thanks for eveything:)
you can use "I" but you can't use "ı".
Can you see the difference?
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