First of all,ı want to correct some spelling mistakes. On the first page:"He had wanted to break his habits." On the second page:"They affect human health badly and We use this drugs in order to escape somethings which make us nervous." On the third page:"This story tells you his life after he breaks his bad habits. On the last page:"We think he will not use anything which makes him numb." I hope that you will be more carefull.In addition,ı guess that you will show attention to harmony among the pages,in particular,the backgrounds on your other stories.
The present KERPOOF story telling project was designed to explore how 16 EFL university students studying at the Preparatory School, Sakarya University/Turkey weave fictional stories into the media enriched environment, and how the use of a particular software sparks the creative writing among them.
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First of all,ı want to correct some spelling mistakes. On the first page:"He had wanted to break his habits." On the second page:"They affect human health badly and We use this drugs in order to escape somethings which make us nervous." On the third page:"This story tells you his life after he breaks his bad habits. On the last page:"We think he will not use anything which makes him numb." I hope that you will be more carefull.In addition,ı guess that you will show attention to harmony among the pages,in particular,the backgrounds on your other stories.
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