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Purpose of KERPOOF Research Project
The present KERPOOF story telling project was designed to explore how 16 EFL university students studying at the Preparatory School, Sakarya University/Turkey weave fictional
stories into the media enriched environment, and how the use of a particular software sparks the creative writing among them.
stories into the media enriched environment, and how the use of a particular software sparks the creative writing among them.
2 comments:
Hi Melih,
Your story is pretty good but you have some grammatical mistakes. For example, "She is such a helpful girl that always help her family", you should write a sentence after "that". So you should write "she" after "that".
Also, you should be careful in th euse of singular and plural use of nouns(not two brother, must be "two brothers").
Also, you have some spelling mistakes such as "atack", "casttle".
You should pay attention to the use of words. For example, not "to explorer", it should be "to explore"; not "this behave made her...", it should be "this behaviour made her .....".
The thing I love a lot in your story is the background and the characters. I could understand the story by looking at them. It is very colourful and I enjoy very much while I am reading your story.
Hi Melih,
I like your story. It is very good as usual. The background of your story and the place of characters on the pages are designed very good.
In your story there are some spelling mistakes you should review what you write before you publish and share your story.
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